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The Monday Morning Memo

Indy,

The Wizard has often said that good ad copy will work on any media.  It is the message that is important.  

I was speaking with one of my brilliant Wizard of Ads Partners, Matthew Burns, the other day and he shared a little story that demonstrates what Roy has been saying.  

Matt has a customer that is in the landscaping business outside Toronto.  They decided to run a small ad with a tiny budget.  The goal was to start to line up new commercial snow removal customers.  Not single family homes – larger projects.

They decided to spend $350 boosting to advertise on Kijji.  (Think Craigslist). Did I mention he was looking for commercial customers?

So here is what happened.  They spend $350 bucks and within the week they got a call from a prospect that was outside of the trade area.  The prospect knew they were outside the trade because they visited the website.  They were intrigued enough by the ad to looked at the website, found they were outside the trade area and called anyway.

Matt’s landscape customer decided to bid on the high side.  And he won the business.   And it was a co-op of 22 houses in Toronto.  Did I mention he bid on the high side. A nice chunk of business for a $350 ad on Kijjii.

Here is the ad…

Winter is coming.  I know it doesn’t seem like it right now, but it is. We want you and your employees to be safe and sound when arriving and leaving work after a snow storm.   Stadium Property Stars has been battling Jack Frost for years and knows all his moves.  Our professional, licensed drivers are ready to clear snow from driveways, parking spaces, walkways, door entrances and wherever you need to have safe and easy access.  We also have a super salt spreading move that Jack Frost can’t quite figure out.  Call now to get your quote and let us be your champion against all of Jack Frost’s tricks. Stadium Property Stars is a full service landscaping company proudly serving the Brampton and Caledon communities.

www.stadiumpropertystars.com

The magic in this ad would be easy to miss.  It is mystery.  Leaving things out.  While competitors list all the things they do – Matt chose to wrap the service in intrigue.  “We also have a super salt spreading move that Jack Frost can’t quite figure out.”  

Magical Thinking.

Stephen Semple
Director – Wizard of Ads Canada

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“Visualization is simply the mental rehearsal of possible future events. When the word ‘rehearse’ was invented more than 700 years ago, it simply meant to hear again; to re-hear.

I am an ad writer. My job is to get people to imagine doing what my client wants them to do. I cause future customers to rehearse future events in their minds.

I could just as easily have been a songwriter.

When you repeatedly imagine an action, or a sequence of future events in your mind, you move precipitously close to taking that action and bringing those events to pass.

Guard your thoughts. The more often you imagine an event, the more likely you are to take that action in real life.

NOTE to Ad Writers: Your audience will not imagine an action until you use a verb.

Few sentences are as captivating as a sentence written in 2nd-person perspective, with present-tense verbs.

“You are standing in the snow, five and one-half miles above sea level, gazing at a horizon hundreds of miles away. It occurs to you that life here is very simple: you live or you die. No compromises, no whining, no second chances. This is a place constantly ravaged by winds and storm, where every ragged breath is an accomplishment. You stand on the uppermost pinnacle of the earth. This is the mountain they call Everest. Yesterday it was considered unbeatable. But that was yesterday.”

This is the point in the radio ad where we move from 2nd-person, present tense into 3rd-person, past tense.

“As Edmund Hillary surveyed the horizon from the peak of Mount Everest, he monitored the time on a wristwatch that had been specifically designed to withstand the fury of the world’s most angry mountain. Rolex believed Sir Edmund would conquer the mountain, and especially for him they created the Rolex Explorer.”

And then we move into 2nd-person, future tense.

“In every life there is a Mount Everest to be conquered. When you have conquered yours, you’ll find your Rolex waiting patiently for you to come and pick it up at Justice Jewelers.”

Finally, the listener meets the speaker as we wrap the ad in 1st person, present tense.

“I’m Woody Justice and I’ve got a Rolex for you.””

- Roy H. Williams

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